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The mom? You mean Evelyn? She doesn't appear in the story. Only Sabrina's mom appears and nothing happens with her because the story is brutally rushed-ended, that's why the "final version" is barely v 0.14...
That's why this "final version" is barely 0.14...
I love the musics buuuuuut they couldn't be more off-the-mark here.
I mean, these musics would be great in some sci-fi setting as they sound very cyber-punk.
But do you think a cyber-punk feeling suits well in this setting here?
The author has great tastes in musics but he obviously has no clue which music to use in which setting, which ruins the atmosphere in pretty much all of his scenes as the musics give a vibe which is completely off-topic with the current scenes, that's a shame.
Towards the end, there is a cross-over with the characters from another visual novel from the same author and that annoys me because I hate when unrelated things are mixed together.
There is no actual connection between the stories, It feels like an advertisement for the other story inserted in this story, it feels out of place, it harms the immersion.
Moreover, the mentioned threesome is said to be Miracle and Sabrina's first time then what about Miracle's first time in the hotel?
Also, I am very disappointed that we don't get to witness Sabrina's first time.
Actually, the story is good until Sasha's first time in the kitchen but right after that, it is not worth continuing because it skips straight to the conclusion, it lacks a lot of development, the ending just happen all of a sudden, as if right after Sasha's first time, the author didn't want to continue so he made a rushed conclusion and called the story "completed".
She does show up when out on a date with Paris or Sasha
The threesome is on Sabrina's path
