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The Last Star Walker [Chapter 1] [Veluxa]

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There's also the choices to consider. Well there's only one choice in all of chapter 1 you get to make and I am not sure if it matters or not. So. in my opinion, this is barely an AVN at all and almost a Kinetic Novel.

I usually like Kinetic Novels, simply because they dont lie to you with choices that dont mean anything or are just about seeing lewds. I wouldn't have minded if the one and only choice offered in Chapter 1 was simply removed but if the Dev is gonna have choices they should be meaningful and you... more than just one!

The dev could have asked if I wanted to lewd the girls in chapter 1 instead of just jumping right in, I would have appreciated that.



   
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In conclusion, I think this AVN needs to be rewritten. The First chapter needs to focus on one character, the Second chapter is when the parallel world can be introduced. Preferably after introducing the idea that alternate dimensions are possible and that the MC has an alternate version of himself there so the reader is not confused.

I give these one 1 stars. The one thing it really gets right is the graphics quality so that's the only thing I am giving it credit for.



   
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girl on girl is gay grooming as well



   
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But no dick fetish...



   
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