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Jessica's Choices - Series of Events [v0.10] [DoAdventures]

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Welcome to Jessica’s Choices – Series of Events. If you have previously read my story, I hope you will find this even more enjoyable. Jessica is a young woman; she lives alone and in a large city. In this multiple-choice visual novel, you choose what happens. Out of the four possible starting points, she could be a student, looking for a new job, tangled up in a mess of revenge or a criminal defence attorney.

There are several other starting points which might be added in time… But for the interested, whore house, back home for the week with a lecherous uncle, on a business trip, working at an old folk’s home, living her life as a sub, in a coma, spy or just going to the gym. Each scenario has sprawling multiple choices and each more devious than the last.

I would like to point out that this is a work in progress for both myself and the project. It isn't as good as it can be and I will go back, add more renders, story and choices throughout. I'll be sure to keep the changelog up to date.​

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Developer: DoAdventures - Discord |Ā Twitter | Itch | SubscribeStar | Boosty | DeviantArt | Steam |
Censored: No
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux, Android
Language: English
Mini Games: Jessica’s Choices - Origins
Genre: 3DCG, Creampie, Dilf, Drugs, Exhibitionism, Female domination, Female protagonist, Groping, Group sex, Humiliation, Lesbian, Male domination, Milf, Multiple penetration, Oral Sex, Rough Sex, Sexual Harassment, Slave, Sleep Sex, Stripping ,Teasing, Vaginal sex

Installation:
Extract and run.

v0.10

Stats total

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  69,039 words

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  3,148 renders

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  45 menus

V0.10 What’s New?

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  260 Renders

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  All screens within the game changed to ā€œSceneā€ from show – to reduce any excessive ram usage that might have been experienced in the past.

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  Third option for Pproductions added, small continuation to the massage room, two continuations to the revenge storylines.

Ā·Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā  Background work done for the next release – including but not limited to; hospital, rejecting the meal, job at the cafĆ©, further sexual harassment in the pizzeria, further work done when Jessica beats Penny in the fight, more massage threesome stuff and the Spy mission setup and what happens afterwards.


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What the fuck is this???

It's about a minute or so of some girl walking around her apartment naked... then she answers the door where three guys (whom she apparently knows and owes something to them) come in her apartment and immediately start to rape her. The only "choices" are debt or revenge, and rough or fair. Then game intro ends. WTF! Its fucking stupid!


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Thanks for biting the bullet. You experienced that bs and now the rest of us don't have. God speed.


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In a bid to not repeat myself from above. I would like to apologise for how the game ends and takes you back to the intro screen. I made sure that there was a message to explain this. I'm on a two weekly release schedule and there are further choices being made available.


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Don't worry about repeating yourself. Although you are probably wasting your time. I don't think they will listen or read it.

THX for the game, keep it up!


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Wonder how you feel now. Despite the review, I gave it try and found it to be over an hour and half of game play.


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Choices... be raped in the ass or in the pussy.
Amazing "choices".
Lazy writer


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This is the very beginning, I apologise if it doesn't interest you. There are over 100 choices in this story alone that sprawls different scenarios depending on what you choose. "Debt Owed" and "Revenge" are the first two choices I decided to put in. There are another two choices going in over the next week and a bit which introduces "Defence Attorney" & "Looking for a job" the later of which includes nine different choices and all aimed towards the reader and their respective niche


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FMC. Only worth play if 100% lesbian path is possible.
Forced dick. No interest.


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Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner. There is lesbian only paths. No dick at all. But I've chosen to start with the current specific options at the beginning because the way these storylines progress, there is a lot of different niches involved.


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This comment hasn't aged well has it?


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Welcome to Jessica's fake choices.


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Hello all,

I'm the developer of this game and unfortunately not all details for this game ported over.

I would like to point out that this is a work in progress for both myself and the project. It isn't as good as it can be and I will go back, add more renders, story and choices throughout. I'll be sure to keep the changelog up to date too.

Welcome to my first…. Demo. My name is DoAdventures, and I’ve been writing stories for more than 15 years now with around 27 stories in total and have amassed a rather large following. This particular story ā€˜Series of Events’ doesn’t tie into any of the other stories but gave me a platform to test this out, see how it is received and potentially get some new followers. Series of events is an aberration of the Jessica Stanhead stories and whilst I enjoyed writing it, I’d recommend that you don’t waste too much time on thinking about where it fits into the others.


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I would be surprised to discover a dev actually came to a site like this. People here tend to only review as a complaint or to insult everyone else commenting. It's an interesting concept, like the choose your own adventure books back in the day, but with illustrations. It's also kinda niche market when you have the tags you do. Dark route games with FMC do ok though, look at The Fixer, it does alright with 2d imagery. Some improvements to the quality would be a big first step. Some of the views of Jessica's tits make them look like misshapen bags only partly filled. For now I have to give a 3 out of 5. There just isn't enough to give any kind of proper rating or review.


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Hey, thanks for the feedback. I'm trying all I can to make sure I respond to everyone, from everywhere. I know her breasts look shit in the beginning, I was thinking too much about her just waking up and I really just ended up screwing up those renders. I'm currently on my second release, due out on Thursday. I'll then be going back to sort out the mess of those first renders.


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After thinking again about what you said about her tits being misshapen bags that only looked partly full, I've gone back and fixed those renders in time for the release this week.


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I be honest with you, you can't twist this in to something worth to play or support, except for some twisted perverts. For anyone else this is disgusting.


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Wow! I mean, no one asked you to download it and the tags are all there in plain sight. I'm sure the Dev will love this feedback???


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Why for being honest, is it better to sugar coat it.


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I welcome all feedback, this particular VN does have some dark routes and I think I said in another forum, not here

"Yeah I haven't made it easy for myself but, if it were easy - I probably wouldn't do it. The idea behind it is for the reader, their own niche is satisfied (Whilst it might take me some time to do) . I write a lot of content and I'm aware that there might be paths that will never be seen, but... That's the nature of this type of VN."




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At least you try, and take criticism better than most developers. I will try again when there is more content.


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If it helps, my Discord has more updates and spoilers. I'm happy for all feedback to be honest. And I know this is a very rough around the edges VN - I hope to get better at this side of it. I know my writing is good enough, I've got a huge following on that, I just need to get a handle on the VN properly.


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So happy to see the developer here and discussing his game. I do have a question, if you don't mind. Why are the images so small?


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Hi sorry,

I thought I had responded to this. The images are small because I was an idiot in setting up Renpy initially and as it was my first game, I didn't realise that I was missing a crucial step. That was my mistake. However, the new game (made simultaneously and more like an AVN that everyone is used to) is 1920 x 1080

Thanks,
DoAdventures


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Very little for nearly a quarter of the way done.


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I'm not sure what you mean? This hasn't even begun to scratch the surface of the work written for Series of Events. If i could share an image with you for all the chapters written and previously published and then all the chapters I have written but not published, i think it would make some eyes water. My own included 😂

This is going to be a big project, feel free to drop by my discord or have a look on Chyoa for me.


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Good start, DoAdventures, interesting concept. Possibility of many VN paths to enjoy. Good luck with your project.


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bruuuh,, how about fucking finishing one route instead of starting 10 of them and not giving any type of satisfaction ffs


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If I did that, it would be boring as hell. At least for me anyway. IMO, There is no point in alienating different readers and genres by just providing one path, not to mention that each path has about 100 chapters written already with various different choices throughout, choices that might never be read or even cared about but still, choices nevertheless.

I will apologise though, because the revenge path is much longer than what I've released. There is a much more satisfying conclusion to it but to meet deadlines (self imposed deadlines, but deadlines all the same) I had to comment them out. It won't be long before they are in the VN with additional choices added to them but I'm just a one man band.


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The very first picture depicts heroine with some black girl. And on the last - woman with no hair. Not sexy at all.


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Yeah I'm not sure why all the images aren't available and only those ones were chosen to represent the game here on Fap. All previews, promo images and sneak peaks are available on my Discord, on the F95 thread, on ITCH and free images are on my Patreon and Subscribestar.


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