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Laws of Love [v1.0] [TaleWizz]

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A surprise job offer takes you from your small town to New York's most prestigious firm.
Can you handle the highest levels of law....and love?

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Developer: TaleWizz -Ā Itch |
Censored: No
OS: Windows, Linux, Android
Language: English
Genre: 3DCG, Male Protagonist, Big Ass, Big Tits, Vaginal Sex, Creampie, Teasing, Groping, Mobile Game

Installation:
Extract and run.


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Hey Dev! If you are reading this, nice start! Story is decent so far, however there are a lot of spelling errors as well as grammar errors. Some of the scenes were hard to read because of trying to figure out what words were being used or intended to be used. Can always dump your text in to a spell checker first. Great start tho!


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Or just ask someone to proof it :-/ I don't get why devs don't do this. You can pay someone on fiverr $5 and they'd proof everything.


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Hell, I'd do it for free.


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So, another convoluted dyslexic shitfest nobody can read or understand.

That's great.


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Learn to read, cock sucker!


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Some people are challenges with reading comprehension.


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Huh!???......Did anyone understand what he/she wrote? (point's to comment above).


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hint hint: typos exist, kid


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wait, does that mean Why Me is the dev?


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I think you meant to say that some people are 'challenged'. What you wrote stated that some people ARE challenges. Some people are literally challenging to work with. They are a challenge others are confronted with.

I think English isn't your first language. I only speak English, so well do you! As a matter of fact, I have dyslexia, and likely made mistakes in this comment despite being in my 50s. I fully understand the frustration of the other commentors, but some are being rude and abusive, rather than constructive.

I recommend trying to find a native English speaker, without dyslexia, to edit your posts, 9r pay for a service like Grammerly.


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Great Story man,Keep up the good work,and bring on the good stuff


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Not enough content to really say anything about story wise. The amount of typos doesn't give a good feel for going forward, Graphics are good and some of the women look ok just seems like the dev rushed to get out a little bit of content and from the amount of mistakes really doesn't care about their project. 1 star


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Alright, I see a lot of complaints about the grammar and English, so I'll skip it. Hopefully the next update the reviews will be more positive.


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This is the only game where women look real.
There are no white, black, or brown women. A woman can only be red. As they are warm from the nuclear fission with hormones. Only makeup can hide their redness. Pour water on the woman and make her cold.


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Lol šŸ˜€


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Itcho patreon... nothing more. Abandoned.

Dev. Try make more of 2 lines of overview in next game (in new page). Add planed tags. Schedule.


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